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Shoot Me
by lost_in_red
written on November 06, 2009 10:23 PM
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Have you got 5 hours to kill?
Have you got 5 minutes to die?
Are you willing to make a change?
Are you even willing to try?
Stop staring at the computer
Their controlling
Your life
Stop pointing the gun at the
Innocent,
Point it at the ones responsible
For your
Suffering.
Stop feeling sorry for yourself
Star trying to
Fix it,
And stop pretending you're not
Listening to me.
Realize your fear
Set aside your pride
Start talking when your scared
Stop trying to hide.
Live with your faults
Survive in your guilt
And stop thinking your
The only one feeling that way.
And I know you're feeling
This way because you're
In front
Of me
Now
And I'm the one controlling
Your life
And I'm the one
You're pointing the gun at.
So go ahead.
I dare you.
Shoot.



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that_scene_girl: I love this poem it's amazing.
on November 07, 2009 6:43 PM


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