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The lost struggle
by Robfloptop
written on November 03, 2009 10:10 PM
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Losing his hold
No longer bold
The grip dwindling down
A smile to a frown
His hopes no more
dreams became poor, sore
From an alibic mind, confined
So blind
To even see the light
In constant fright
Of the future
Wishing he could change the past
His happiness to last
But its too late
To change fate
Inept to his sadness
No more cheer
There is too much fear
He can't continue on
His hopes are gone
To an unreachable place.
The look on his face
To know he won't succeed
To fail, never to be freed
His only opportune moment, blown
Never to be sewn
Never to know what its like again
A Despondent smile
Trying for a while
Till it fades
The shades
Of fear, no longer sincere
Crushed by life
This horrid strife
Cutting his emotions like a knife
In this abyss
The lights amiss
Ongoing battle
This Straddle
Tearing him from reality, solidarity
Weakening his mentality
Fatality.



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JenE27: I kinda like this one. The flow is really nice, and I like the way it ends. In the middle it seemed a little amateur at times, but it started and ended strong I thought.
on November 03, 2009 10:57 PM


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