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On my knees
by LadyJ91
written on November 08, 2009 8:12 PM
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Falling to my knees
cussing, screaming someone
help me please.

Reaching,pleading,calling up to the sky
I look back at my life and ask myself why?

Pondering, how did I get myself in this situation,
and asking for the strenght to pick up the pieces.

Years,tears slipping through my fingers,I need to get a grip if theres ever a chance for happiness to exist.

Staring at my daughter through puffy red eyes this is it.
I fall to the floor and cry.

I find myself on my knees with still no response.
GOD ....If you're there could you please help me up?





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emo_punk_princess: this great. I agree about the description i could completely picture it
on November 09, 2009 12:00 PM
imagine27pce: sweet poem good description was able to picture this scene in my head
on November 02, 2009 2:20 PM


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