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This Poem's Definately Not Written For You
by suffer_in_silence
written on November 02, 2009 8:54 AM
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Despite what they say,
My heart is not broken in two,
And whatever you think,
This poem's not written for you.

It's not your eyes I'm describing,
Just a pair uncanny to yours,
The same shape and ocean blue,
But they're not yours of course.

I'm not writing about your smile,
Or reminiscing the taste of your kiss,
I'm not thinking of your mouth at all,
In fact I'm thinking of his.

It's not your arms I'm missing,
Or longing to hold me tight,
And it's not you I'll be thinking of,
When I fall asleep tonight.

I'm not shedding tears for you,
There's just something in my eye,
I'm not wondering what I did wrong,
Or feeling I'm about to die.

It's not you who inspired this verse,
And you didn't motivate this rhyme,
I don't think about you at all,
And certainly not all the time.

Despite what they say,
My heart is not broken in two,
And whatever you think,
This poem's not written for you,
No, it's definitely not written for you.

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Melancholic_Maggie: repetition of the 1st stanza*
on November 02, 2009 7:33 PM
Melancholic_Maggie: a perfectly written lyrical ballad..i like the repetition of the first stanza..melancholic ans sublime <3
on November 02, 2009 7:31 PM
kissez: WOW.i love it.really good job.love the way you wrote it
on November 02, 2009 11:36 AM
shopahaulic456: aweeee this is adorable! i really like how you express your refusal to have feelings for him. this is very good. keep writing(;
on November 02, 2009 11:19 AM
wltjscow: I love it! The rhymes, and it's so sweet
on November 02, 2009 10:24 AM
Mertina: this is sad :( but kind of sweet at the same time. i really dont know how to explain it. it probably feels that way to me because it rhymes.
on November 01, 2009 9:34 PM


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