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Melancholic_Maggie: repetition of the 1st stanza* on November 02, 2009 7:33 PM |  |
Melancholic_Maggie: a perfectly written lyrical ballad..i like the repetition of the first stanza..melancholic ans sublime <3 on November 02, 2009 7:31 PM |  |
kissez: WOW.i love it.really good job.love the way you wrote it on November 02, 2009 11:36 AM |  |
shopahaulic456: aweeee this is adorable! i really like how you express your refusal to have feelings for him. this is very good. keep writing(; on November 02, 2009 11:19 AM |  |
wltjscow: I love it! The rhymes, and it's so sweet on November 02, 2009 10:24 AM |  |
Mertina: this is sad :( but kind of sweet at the same time. i really dont know how to explain it. it probably feels that way to me because it rhymes. on November 01, 2009 9:34 PM |  |
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