November 21, 2009 4:59pm 357 online Daily: What special plans do you have for this weekend? Click here to answer
Home Articles Forums Blogs Chat Win Stuff Games Pics Advice Writing Tests Listings More...

POETRY


Home  My Poems  Showcase  Search  Rate Poems  Bust-A-Rhyme

Let Me Be
by Melancholic_Maggie
written on November 02, 2009 5:12 PM
No votes yet!
0 users have rated this poem
This poem has been viewed 7 times

Rate this poem: 

Leave feedback

Read feedback (2)

Random Poem


Let me be your sunshine on a rainy day,
Let me be a shoulder for you to cry on,
Let me be like your own lighthouse guiding you on a foggy day-
Let me be your other self, to trust and confide in.
Let me be a meteor and grant you a wish,
Let me be the drizzling rain to wash away your pain,
Let me be your unborn child, vulnerable and fetish.
Let me be your wildest dream and take me in to tame,
Let me be your one and true love,
Let me be free and soar above like a dove.

feb09



Feedback
Read what other people have to say about this poem!

Mertina: this is really sweet, as maria said. you love using lighthouses as figurative language too
on November 02, 2009 7:59 PM
suffer_in_silence: aww that's really beautiful and sweet, really love the opening and closing lines and the 'rain/pain' line <3
on November 01, 2009 7:46 PM


Leave Feedback
Leave your feedback below.

Click here to register for free!
O B F U S C A T E