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suffer_in_silence: i do really like what you've written, it's very powerful, but to me the 1st stanza doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem, because it's a shorter length than the other verses perhaps, still a really great poem though <3 on November 09, 2009 7:55 PM |  |
xXSkkarlettXx: this is a great poem (even tho its not finished)
but i'd love to hear the rest,
good job(: on November 08, 2009 3:14 PM |  |
chelly12: continue on November 05, 2009 4:37 PM |  |
OurDaysofGrace: yeah, I agree. I like this alot! keep going; I wanna read the rest of it =) on November 04, 2009 12:19 AM |  |
JenE27: So far, I like it! on November 04, 2009 12:00 AM |  |
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