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blood runs,ters flow
by ahbababoo
written on November 05, 2009 8:28 PM
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blood runs, tears flow
why do i feel so low,
blood runs, tears flow
and it shows

tears are cried
cause love has deid
tears are cried
my tears i cant hide

his gone but still hear
my sight is blurrd
my vision is clear
his gone but still hear
help me to see clear

i need him cause i love him
and i dont care what drama it brings
i just love him
and my life is nothing with out him

he makes me feel so bautiful
makes things meaningful

i miss him
i need him
i want him

for one reson

I LOVE HIM



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SaraWalker: i know the feeling.. well done
on September 10, 2009 11:08 AM
withyouforever: I like it but you don't need him beleive me. I really like the "my sight is blurred, My vision is clear" and the "he makes me feel so beautiful, makes things meaningfull"
on August 31, 2009 3:51 AM


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