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Running On Repeat
by 4EverAZN
written on November 04, 2009 8:54 PM
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Sweat dripping onto the pavement,
Eyes filled with only determination.
Hopeful bodies watching behind concealed walls,
Can't truly understand the feel of one's downfall.
Pressure's on, sudden weight on the shoulders.
Heat is gone, atmosphere feeling a little colder.
Encouragement only falls upon deaf ears;
Body paralyzed, numbed by fear.
Fear of disappointment, fear of defeat;
Fear of the past mistakes running on repeat.
Lose the focus, you lose your aim.
Lose control, you lost the game...



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LilDiva23: ****ing amazing!! love it
on November 07, 2009 10:00 AM
I_am_who_I_am: Props! I like
on June 08, 2009 10:23 PM
twisted_love13: wow this is great.i loved it
on April 04, 2009 7:19 PM
Baby_Face69: this was amazing. =]
on December 04, 2008 10:41 AM
Boricua_Serenity34: this was another "wow" one. i really like it, as i was reading it i could picture the motion and the further i got into it i could feel what you felt in this poem. U speak for a lot of atheletes when they read this and u did a good job. Ur talented, keep up the writing
on November 10, 2008 11:05 PM
shopahaulic456: wow your poem is very good. you have talent!! jeesh i am so jealous. God has blessed you with an amazing gift to be able to write such poems with such eaze. i really like your poem a lot. its very inspiring and shows a lot of thought. God bless you. ~brit
on November 09, 2008 6:19 PM


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