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Hold Dearly In Truth
by alone_am_i
written on November 02, 2009 4:43 AM
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I'm but a fool,
With a pocket full of gold,
Given dimes for my pennies,
Saving souls of the many,
And keeping young from the old.

I divide you up by downs,
For every smile you frown,
You cost your place in triads:
You leave yourself unsound.
Left dirty poor,
Asking four more,
Then the three behind,
Of the two who scored.

Of two who won,
You've placed the gun,
And pulled the trigger,
You thought was fun.

Through the games of life,
A loser comes-grips the end,
Holding dearly in truth,
To their dying friend.

It was but one game,
They say,
I never thought,
He'd go away.



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ilbks: very nice
on November 02, 2009 3:52 PM
Melancholic_Maggie: i really like ur poems..they are just different and unique..very refreshing..
on August 07, 2008 9:29 PM
ChapterSeven: interesting....very interesting. caught my attention. better than other poems that are like "omg my boyfriend/girlfriend dumped me, the world is coming to an end!"
on July 22, 2008 4:14 AM
lilrome05: man this is a great poem i love what it consists of...great writing
on July 14, 2008 2:20 PM
lilrome05: man this is a great poem i love what it consists of...great writing
on July 14, 2008 2:20 PM
Reiyan: Wow I did really like this better then alot of stuff usally on here hope to read more from you.
on July 14, 2008 10:27 AM
Damini: I srsly don't get the poem. Sounds like you delibrately wrote those things down coz u wanted them to ryhme. But nevertheless, i must say, kind of intriguing.
on July 14, 2008 9:02 AM
EmiiM: I ABSOLUTELY LOVE your poems.! I cant really understand them all the time, but you give an awesome flow to your writing.!
on July 10, 2008 12:20 AM


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