BennyOs: All in all, our existance has no cosmic meaning, someomes death might perhaps have some sort of impact on our civilization later on, but when your dead you dont have to worry about society or there problems. Our existance wont even have an impact on a cosmic scale. The unversise will still exist long after were gone having no effect from our extinction.
I know im being sinicle, But If you look at it from the universe's point of view its exactly what it looks like.
Although if you want to kill yourself go ahead, youll keep yourself from living the life you want to live, things you possibly could do, and if you dont have any dreams or goals by the time your out of high school. Then you better hurry the **** up about what you want to do with your life or else it will fade away and no one will remember you, no one will miss you. You will be forgotten as your friends move on with there separate lives after your dead and gone, your corpse rotting in your grave.
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Devitta: WOW.. that was an amazing poem I abosolutley love it. Very very inspiring. It lets people know that they should keep on living no matter what happens in their life. Great Job
on October 17, 2009 3:21 PM |
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priscilahf: Loved every bit of it, Kept me intersted throughout the whole poem, keep writing you got mad skills. =)
on April 13, 2009 7:26 PM |
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shopahaulic456: Wow this is very deep. I like it alot. Keep writing. Everyone must think you're very good, since you got so much feedback. =]
on March 29, 2009 6:20 PM |
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Baby_Face69: you're a talented writer. props to you.
on December 04, 2008 10:42 AM |
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devilindisguize: awesome writing, i agree with what everyone else has said.
on October 19, 2008 4:39 PM |
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Simplyflames93: Incredible, tho i suppose you've already figured tht out from other feedback XD but seriously i liked the emotion and strength behind this :) xx
on August 09, 2008 7:28 AM |
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Vicky5621: It's excellant! I really loved it. Awesome. PLz keep writing!
on July 31, 2008 12:36 PM |
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ny1luv: GOOD..REALLY GOOD!!
on July 18, 2008 7:27 PM |
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DP_Lives: I Like This Poem. I Wish I Could Write Like This
on July 17, 2008 9:29 PM |
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Reiyan: Well I liked it but I liked some of the others better.
on July 16, 2008 12:08 AM |
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machiaveli: whew!!!!!! talk about sweetness, I must say and agree with everybody else. That was deep and absolutely beautiful. Congradulations again...haven't stopped amazing me yet.
on April 06, 2008 6:40 AM |
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queen_flurrtz: all i can say is you brought me into the
back with you..
it felt so real, such vivid detail
kepp it uppppp!;;
<3
on March 28, 2008 10:06 PM |
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Vicky5621: You are so amazing. How do you get that deep? its totally amazing.
on October 27, 2007 10:46 PM |
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jetaime02: wow!!! ure an awesome poem writer person. ure really deep thats awesome
on October 08, 2007 6:24 AM |
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aMacera: Wow.. this poem is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo deep, excellent you're an excellent writer! well done!! this is great
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