LilDiva23: I absolutely love it!! great talent!! i can totally relate..
on November 07, 2009 9:54 AM |
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m_a_sistersforever23: I totally agree with you, i have had many loves in my life but my first and true love is still in my heart. I hope he will come back one day and i will keep waiting but the pain of losing him never goes away. You will always think what if i stayed. This poem has the feelings of a true lover and never give up hope. Maybe he will come back but if he doesnt dont ever forget him. He will bring you strength in whatever you do, trust me. (i kinda went lesbian because of the pain of losing him but i believe he will come back one day)
on October 26, 2009 12:35 PM |
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hushbaby93: This is truely amazing! I know this feelings. With my first love I felt like I could concur the world.
on June 08, 2009 10:37 PM |
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siremo16: this poem is awsome, I love it, this is the way I felt after my first breakup, very well writen!!
on April 18, 2009 11:37 PM |
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Emmie4494: This is brilliant I can't believe how much fb you have on it alreadyh lol this is truley the best poem I have read so far please keep writing and I love the title I think it fits!!!
-Emmie
on April 18, 2009 12:52 AM |
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shopahaulic456: Damn this is awesome. I love it! And by the massive amount of feedback, so does everyone else. This is how I feel right now. =[ It sucks. Amazinggg poem. 10 star. God bless, ~Britt
on April 14, 2009 3:35 PM |
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sexyme1: This poem reminds me alot of y self and a friend i once had and loved
on December 02, 2008 5:04 PM |
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SophiaLibra: omg, I love this poem! Its a great poem about love! great job! keep writing! :D
on December 02, 2008 3:14 PM |
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jesus_follower24: wow, amazing, fabulous,great peom
on November 22, 2008 1:13 PM |
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Thelightisnthere: amazinggg!!!!!!!!!!
Simply amazing.
I just got my heart crushed so I know how you feel.. <333
Looking forward to more of your poems :D
on November 12, 2008 6:11 PM |
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llyfe: listen you are very talented and as a poet i respect your work, its gud to be confident but dont get ****y and definitely dont listen to wat other people have to say, take the criticism and use it to your advantage dont let anyone stop your show
on August 08, 2008 2:03 PM |
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kookykate: I <3 it, nothin bad 2 say 10/10
on July 31, 2008 7:55 AM |
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Reiyan: Well this did a tear to my eye and that is not easy to do. I will look forward to more you are earning another fan.
on July 16, 2008 12:06 AM |
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DayDay92: Awwwwwwwwwwwww.......That was beautiful. Like Im really crying right now. I love it. Keep right writing cuz u really got talent!!!!
on June 26, 2008 6:20 PM |
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VoNtRez_LuV_Me_DUH: that was real good :)
on June 12, 2008 6:04 PM |
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Moonlight_Angel_04388: WOW! this is the most beautiful poem that i've ever read, you're writing skills are amazing, keep up the great work
on May 26, 2008 1:00 PM |
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machiaveli: awwww, look at you getting all emotional on me. hahaha that was beautiful I must say. I think it should be a prequel to one of my love poems. Don't remember which one yet but I think you're pretty close to my level in writing if you're not there yet. hehe I liked it...very nice.
on April 06, 2008 6:36 AM |
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babeexlovee: it is an amazing poem . everyone can relate to this especially me , keep writing more poems like these .
there are wonderful <3
on April 05, 2008 8:25 PM |
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RCK_ENK22: ABSOLUTLY AMAZING
on April 04, 2008 6:47 PM |
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Rubberducky69: i DISAGREE, I THINK UR TRYIONG TOO HARD, TAKE IT FRON AN O'G, JUST RELAX AND LET IT COME TO U NATURALLY
on April 04, 2008 6:36 PM |
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FallenAngel_22: wow amazing poem Keep it up
this was great I wish i could write like that
Angel
on April 04, 2008 12:25 AM |
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Neerdy123: I LOVE this poem I so can relate, you are talented for real!I'm barely getting over mine currently...it's hard:(.
on March 29, 2008 12:35 AM |
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Lilmissp3rf3ct: wow this is beautiful
on March 22, 2008 10:19 PM |
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tipsytwinckle: Omg this is the best poem i have read on here for a very good time , builds good imagery really well written well done, the feelings you put into this definatly come through.
on March 22, 2008 8:40 AM |
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alonegirl49: wow love it i know how u feel i never ever for got my first true love i still think of him till this day i havent seen or talk 2 him in like 3 years
on March 17, 2008 2:38 AM |
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Undercover_Nerd: this is a really good poem keep doing ya thing
on March 16, 2008 3:57 PM |
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Undercover_Nerd: this is a really good poem keep doing ya thing
on March 16, 2008 3:57 PM |
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AndIKnewItAllAlongLuvDino: Good poem! i loved it! your very talented well done!!
on November 18, 2007 10:21 AM |
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SweeterThanSuicide: I have read many of your poems and everyone of then i can relate to... i admire you for being able to not only write your own feelings but also reach out to other people and they can relate to your words... i really envy you for being able to that... but you should be very proud of your writing...
this is awesome
<3
on November 17, 2007 11:17 PM |
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LonelyGirl1991: ohh I like. :)
on November 12, 2007 9:26 PM |
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jetaime02: aww omg thats an awesome poem...so deep
on October 08, 2007 6:23 AM |
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inlovewithhim1: that's really pretty!
on September 24, 2007 6:01 PM |
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aMacera: Wow, well done~!!! very very deep!
on September 23, 2007 3:04 PM |
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Cassie_Renee: wow this poem is beautiful ...i love it
on July 08, 2007 8:18 PM |
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tinkerbell86690: oh that is so pretty....
on June 22, 2007 5:45 PM |
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lilSchmidty324: wow... i know exactly how you feel. this is beautiful
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