BennyOs: virginity
on October 24, 2009 4:36 AM |
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madlittleminx: i like it, i agree with lilmissp3rf3ct.
on May 24, 2009 3:24 PM |
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Boricua_Serenity34: wow i love dis poem, it's different,
and fun. You did a good job
getting your point across w/o going overboard.
keep on goin
on November 10, 2008 11:00 PM |
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devilindisguize: love it!
on October 20, 2008 5:36 AM |
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HazeYblurr: kool man...
yummy extacy :] lol
on August 08, 2008 5:34 AM |
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Reiyan: I liked this alot toward the end my heart rate got faster as I read faster the rhyming got annoying but still pretty good.
on July 16, 2008 12:12 AM |
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maestro_de_horrar: wow, so hot i love that poem.. bravo!!!!!! i'm sweating lol but seriously great job...:-D -Jay
on May 25, 2008 11:54 AM |
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machiaveli: lol oh man, I read your reviews on this poem and it made me have to read the poem and I must say, I wasn't disappointed. That was...amazing. Gotta give props where props is due. hehe love the visuals put in there. made the poem become alive.
on April 06, 2008 6:31 AM |
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Imway2fly4dis: that was really good
on April 05, 2008 5:50 PM |
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FadedHartBeat: hey, this is pretty good =]
It reminded me of me n my bf..! Lol
Its good. 10 stars. =]
on April 03, 2008 4:19 AM |
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FadedHartBeat: hey, this is pretty good =]
It reminded me of me n my bf..! Lol
Its good. 10 stars. =]
on April 03, 2008 4:19 AM |
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jojojflow: this is a wonderful poem and i enjoyed every part of it. continue to do what you do and god bless
on April 02, 2008 7:14 PM |
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BabyLove814: this is really good, i'm impressed! mind ready mine...."Destiny brings Compliance."
on March 28, 2008 9:45 PM |
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Lilmissp3rf3ct: this is the greatet sexual poem i have eva red!!!
on March 22, 2008 10:27 PM |
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Lilmissp3rf3ct: this is the greatet sexual poem i have eva red!!!
on March 22, 2008 10:26 PM |
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LonelyGirl1991: Wow. I love it.
on November 12, 2007 9:22 PM |
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