that_scene_girl: This poem is amazing. Alot of people have suicidal thoughts running through their minds each day. This gives insight to the people who don't have that constant thought screaching at the back of their minds. I love this poem.
on November 04, 2009 7:01 PM |
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BennyOs: Joel, i know why you did it, Everyone else what just caught in in all the bull**** of the world.
on October 24, 2009 3:35 AM |
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Keyki: This was simply beautifully written (:
on October 18, 2009 6:08 PM |
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Holly_J: Suicide is the hardest thing to go through.
I've made several suicidal attempts and have lost 3 people to it.
It's the worst part about this corrupted world.
The **** some people have to deal with..
on October 17, 2009 12:08 PM |
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sargent_froggie: Amazing.
on October 17, 2009 10:48 AM |
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chelsr: wowww, perfect.
on June 08, 2009 11:58 PM |
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fallen_angel_293: Wow! That was amazing! You've really captured those feelings!
on June 05, 2009 11:03 PM |
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SaraWalker: wow my uncle killed himself and it was really hard for me. this poem is great and it really hit home with me. well written, made me cry. you have alot of talent. keep writing
on June 04, 2009 12:18 AM |
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neon_lizard: awesome me being in the position that you wrote about it was great to see someone's insight that isn't the same way you grasped the emotion very well
on June 03, 2009 9:40 PM |
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jessiecullensolo8908: I love this so much! Keep writing and give me updates! becuase these poems are awesome and have soooooooooooooooooo many meanings to it!
ILY!- jessie
on May 24, 2009 4:17 PM |
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Luvdone: This is so sad, it's making me cry even MORE than the last poem I commented on. and sometimes I feel this way, so It adds an extra degree. Be sure to comment on MY poem, too.
on May 10, 2009 11:43 PM |
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headintheclouds71893: this as extremely powerful poem, its amazingly well written. I have personally had suicidal feelins and still do occasionally this poem truly expresses how someone could make the difference of someone living or dying. please return the favor
on November 17, 2008 7:31 PM |
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Apathy0: The poem is awesome. Kind of is like a reminder that we should think about those we never would usually notice. There are always people out there that feel empathy and that is what help some people write such great poems. Truly amazing!
on November 12, 2008 9:36 PM |
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Raveness14: beutiful,i think every poem is unique in its own way,your really stand out.maybe we could brainstorm together on an idea for another creation.
-Natalia
on November 12, 2008 8:30 PM |
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jasophie: I think this was very g00d but sad keep writing + a guess 0ther pe0pe Like it 2 :]
on November 05, 2008 5:11 PM |
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tipsytwinckle: an extreme amount of truth, it can only take small things to make you happy.
on August 09, 2008 8:55 AM |
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suffer_in_silence: that was rly good, it reminded me of the song 'stole' by kelly rowland, rly good writing <3
on August 09, 2008 3:51 AM |
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lilshortymigit: nicely done! it's a sad reality - it takes suicide to make people realize that someone is in pain.
on August 02, 2008 10:13 PM |
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XxdeadXinsidexX: wow it really liked it...when I was reading this it made me feel..sad I'm not sure what it was actually it's something I don't feel usually. Great job It's well written and shows A LOT of emotion. keep up the good work.
on July 18, 2008 2:02 PM |
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Reiyan: Well. I will not lie I clicked on your poem to see what worthless poem would be titled this. I am amazed at how this is written simply. great I won't say its amazing but pretty darn close do please write more. I look forward to yours most of all I am truely in aww that this was not some rant of how life is boring and not worth living. Dear gods...
on July 16, 2008 12:03 AM |
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oxymoron270: it's very well written. it is a subject very true, unfortunately. that's life for some people. it's a tearjerker, at least for me. I think it would make a great song.
on May 29, 2008 1:24 PM |
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Andie13: This is amazing!! Great emotion and meaning, very well written!
on May 28, 2008 12:14 PM |
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vampire_chick6: its really good but sad
on May 28, 2008 9:37 AM |
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Moonlight_Angel_04388: sad poem, but very well written, i loved it alot
on May 26, 2008 1:02 PM |
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Imway2fly4dis: That was really good u should Like write for a living I plan on it
on April 05, 2008 5:52 PM |
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Vicky5621: Amazing. it truly told people about whats going. I've been suicidal too. NEver attempted it, but have thought about it lots and seriously. Loved it. Please keep writing! :)
on April 05, 2008 5:44 PM |
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sisalk08: i have loved one that did the same thing...
on April 02, 2008 10:29 PM |
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Vicky5621: wow wow wow. deep, and i know where ur coming from .So many people are never given a chance. Please keep writing!!
on March 29, 2008 1:43 AM |
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guesswat: hey, wow, i've written about suicide before and never could get it down pat. read my poem "can you see it?" and please leave soem feedback, i could use the advice. JUST SUCH AN AWESOME POEM 10!
on November 13, 2007 2:19 PM |
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DP_Lives: That Was Really Beautiful. I Truly Love It. Suicide Is Something That Everyone At Least Thinks About. What A Wonderful Way To Approach It.
on November 12, 2007 4:35 PM |
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SweeterThanSuicide: Wow...
got goosebumps reading that...
that is a very powerful poem.
<3
on November 12, 2007 2:58 PM |
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Fay_Mount: wow, beautiful poem. it definitely opens ppl's eyes to the fact that they never really know how they affect someone. nothing appears completely, there is always something that underlies.
on October 28, 2007 3:21 AM |
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Vicky5621: wow. what a strong message. thats totally amazing, the way it flowed and rymned and everything. Beutiful. its amazing how a peice of wotk like this can say so much.U sure said stuff to me. I've thought about it and wow, u put it in perspective.
on October 27, 2007 10:44 PM |
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specialangel8857: AWESOME!!!! The flow and rhyme were perfect. Such a sad poem though. But good. Keep it up! :)
Ashley
on October 11, 2006 4:50 PM |
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lilghost: this poem was really touching because my family has a lot of suicide attemps. It makes people want to face the problems they are having to try to get through any pain and suffering they may have. -Kelly
on July 12, 2006 12:33 AM |
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BrOkEnHeArTeD273: i love it it was awesome...keep writing
on January 27, 2006 7:13 AM |
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carla03: wow you get the suicide thingy like so well and make people really understand it and get to the root
on January 27, 2006 1:20 AM |
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cute_princess_69: wow that was amazing and jst awesome i loved it
on September 09, 2005 7:00 AM |
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brokensoul01: i love that ur really good
on September 08, 2005 10:50 PM |
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kindra1188: Wow, truly amazing. I was suicidal too, but for different reasons, mostly abuse. You have a great talent, keep it up.
*~Kindra~*
on September 08, 2005 10:41 PM |
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smithsFAN: thats was really good i gave you 8 stars:) way better than any of my poems i have to say .
on May 12, 2005 9:00 PM |
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BabySis940: Wow... I loved it so much. I just got over being suicidal, I went to so many places and talked to my friends, they helped me through it they helped me see... tag me sometime
on May 12, 2005 8:24 PM |
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